Q: “Education is a basis of law and order” (Write in 1000 – 1200 words) 125 marks
08-03-2020 15:37 PM
Admin Remarks: Dear Nikhil
● Your Introduction by story explains the theme of the essay precisely and exactly. Good!
● Try to write a brief overview of your write-up after Introduction, it will lead to a smooth reading by examiner.
● You have covered various dimensions such as political, economical, cultural and technological in your essay along with proper examples. Good!
● Try to link various dimensions directly to the theme of the essay which you have missed in some dimension such as in political etc.
● You can give more focus along with some examples in the second part of analysis that is how morality is also important with education.
● Try to mention more facts, examples in your write-up, also try to mention Source of your facts.
● You have fairly concluded your write-up.
● You have nicely analysed the theme in your write-up.
● I hope you will work on suggestions and improve your performance in Next essay.
● It was Good reading experience.